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Revisions Part 8

01-09-2010, 08:00 PM	#1
T-800 Junior Member Offline --> Posts: 17 --> Join Date: Jul 2009	Revisions Part 8 The most recent part of GiJoe Revisions is now up for viewing. Sorry for taking so long to get this up school and work conspired to make sure this took much longer than I had planned to post. Here is a link to my diostory page http://americanshadowwarriors.yolas.../diostories.php Sorry I don't have it formatted to put up in the files section, I am still refining the technique I use. __________________ http://americanshadowwarriors.yolasite.com Let me know what you think of it!

01-10-2010, 12:37 PM	#2
yorktownjoe Enjoying the season Offline --> Posts: 5,106 --> Join Date: Nov 2005	Looks good! Your format flows well enough for my reading enjoyment. Good story!

01-11-2010, 07:40 PM	#3
Trench-Viper Veteran Offline --> Posts: 6,048 --> Join Date: Jun 2008	I think your diostory is coming along nicely and its great to see some slice of life stuff inbetween the action.

01-11-2010, 08:37 PM

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Looks good! Your format flows well enough for my reading enjoyment. Good story!

agreed

BtW 6 & 7 seem not to bee working at the monent

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