Great job dude!!!

Nicely done scenery and pictures.

When are we gonna be able to see that fort you made in a dio?
I'd love to see what the inside looks like

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lol that forts done long gone from the rain and stuff we've had here in Ga. it's on the ground but don't be sad i just added another chapter some of the words are misspelled but i did put dialogue in with this chapter thanks again for all the comments

http://goodtogocustoms.com/forum/in...g51763#msg51763

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"For it is written that a son of Arabia would awaken a fearsome Eagle. The wrath of the Eagle would be felt throughout the lands of Allah and lo, while some of the people trembled in despair still more rejoiced: for the wrath of the Eagle cleansed the lands of Allah and there was peace."

Good job. The dialogue was great.

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thanks dude

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"For it is written that a son of Arabia would awaken a fearsome Eagle. The wrath of the Eagle would be felt throughout the lands of Allah and lo, while some of the people trembled in despair still more rejoiced: for the wrath of the Eagle cleansed the lands of Allah and there was peace."

Awesome work GH, that puts you one up on my lazy butt. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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hehehe thanks i'm working on some stuff right now for my dio like an HQ thing

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"For it is written that a son of Arabia would awaken a fearsome Eagle. The wrath of the Eagle would be felt throughout the lands of Allah and lo, while some of the people trembled in despair still more rejoiced: for the wrath of the Eagle cleansed the lands of Allah and there was peace."

That's a good story and a very well choosen location, dude! Congrats.