Nice setup and choice of scenery.
I think what has been said already is enough. The second and third photos are great, in focus etc.
the figure selection is good. Are these photos the first of your selection or did you take many examples of them and pick from the best?
The best thing I find is to take 2-3 shots sometimes 5 of the same scene. Unless of course you know you've nailed it first shot, then when putting them onto the Cpu pick out of those which ones are the best.
This is a good start though, you should kick on with some encouragement and work towards some more ideas you might have already kicking around.
