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Stunted Man-nerd
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Join Date: May 2007
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Thanks for the feedback, folks.
I hadn't read the piece since I submitted it several weeks ago, and I'm pretty unhappy with it now that I look back on it.
It's one of those cases where you think it'll be easier to write about something you enjoy, but for whatever reason it is more difficult.
I'm still really disappointed that they didn't use any images (not least 'cause it took me FOREVER to compile a collection of them with our slow internet), but most of the flaws are my fault.
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