Thanks for the update,
regarding the dio going longer than you wanted, i know this can happen. particularly when parts before it are relatively short and you enjoy shooting the action scenes.
This was the case in my recent Outrider tribute, where I had a good idea of the action scene at the end, how he was going to scout the building and break in, deal with the terrorists etc, but the two or three parts leading up to this were literally just the setup chapters slotting it all into place.
I did try to make each part have the same amount of pages, which ideally would of spaced it out nicely, as it stands i sarcrificed this balance for choosing the right cut off point, ideally you always want to leave the reader craving more for the next page!
I'm on a little project myself right now, but when I'm done i plan to stop by and have a scope on your chapters
