First off, I need ideas, advice, etc to make the following;

In my upcoming Dio, It's gonna start with MindBender telling Riddick his origins and how he ended up an unwilling participant in the Venom II Project. I wanna achieve this using a picture of MindBender in the background (kinda like a watermark on a webpage) and little hazy bubbles with scenes of Riddick being a Alley Viper, Killing his Commander, being a BlueShirt Cadre, in the lab, etc. I'll post a pic of the crappy start I had soon and you can pick it apart and give me ideas and critique.....


Any critism and ideas are appreciated!!