Great!
 

:D I just got done reading this, I have to admit I gave up SW back in 86 but i understood most of what was happening.
The use of Predator in the action scenes was fantastic, I also enjoyed it when you had both images of the original clone then the view from the predator himself, very well thought out! :)
The CBC program is something I've been tinkering with for a bit now.. I like how it makes it easier to read the comics/story. You can clearly see the advantages here to having the program at your disposal.
I also liked the Major Bludd advert this was very well done :cool:
C-3PO was hilarious.. "Oh my what a mess... " and "How rude" :o

Apart from a few spelling errors nothing that was too confusing that you couldn't work out or detract you from the story line this was an excellent read.

Well done BT this was great to read aside from the usual Joe offerings.. :D Thanks for posting it up. I'm going to email the link to my friend as he is a SW Nut! :p
Rich
P.S you should change the title of the thread to SW Bounty Hunter Dio. ;)

If you're still having a problem you can accessing the story you can try in from the link in my signature. My son and I have been working on a couple of different stories, and we decided to post them on that site. There's one coming up that he wrote that ran into a location change (NY to Ohio) that we need o work around.


Rich that Major Bludd advert that was my son's idea (not bad for a 10 year old) His reason was that comics have ads in them so I should do the same thing. Both that one and the Punisher one were submitted to Marauder. He didn't like the Punisher one said it was too dark. I thought he was going to post them on his site I guess he decided different. Thanks for the great comments.

AWE!-SOME
That was great story! And I must admit, I'm no great SW and Predator fan. I like both series, but nothing personal. But you did a killing job on that! I could complain, that the story is too short, but no... knowing how long it takes to assembly such backgrounds and do the FX...
It is simply a great one. Of course, some shots 'tween Boba Fett and Predator were a bit concerning the Predator series, but this is unavoidable :)

Once again - GREAT story. Hope we see more :)

Honestly I would have like to have gone longer. As for killing off the Predator the orginal plan was to have them both come to the decision that they were equal and walk away from each other. However my friend who I was bouncing ideas off of (during work of course :D ) convinced me otherwise.

Well, I finally got it, dunno what went wrong before.
was it worth it?
Absolutely, great job.
Good action- pacing and storyline.
I agree with above, I loved the ads, esp the Punisher one.
im a bit ambivalent towards all the movie references (both Predator I and II)- I felt that took away some of the originality.
overall though, I am very impressed.
Also- good job on the research.