Chapter 3. Confrontation

[Agent Viper]

I know the pics haven't improved that much, but hey!

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[Agent Viper]

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[SIZE=5]Stormshadow- I have some buisness to attend[/SIZE]

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[Agent Viper]

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[Stormer]

I'm liking the poses, and you're getting some good angles in. Like everyone else has said, work on the focus a bit. I'd also suggest looking at consistency, making sure your captions and speech balloons look the same and making the pictures the same size as at the moment the differences seem pretty random. Speaking of random, it was somewhat sudden to have Storm Shadow say he has something to do then next panel he's already somewhere else and apparently getting the drop on Snake Eyes (who can talk?). Fights and ambushes are cool, but it helps to have them presented in the wider context of the story.

And I don't think it will help the storytelling in the long run if you keep posting new threads for each chapter; it's hard for people to come in and read from the beginning, and we can't find the other parts as easily as if they were in the photos/dios section and we had the "see all Agent Viper's photos" link. You COULD have put the chapters in the dios section -- you say they won't fit but I know for a FACT, as I've done it myself, that you can post one main picture and then post the rest as comments in the replies section!

[General Jones]

Snake Eyes can speak!!